Chapter 4 of Live Wire

[artemisdart]

After a break from August 11 to now, I managed to get Chapter 4 of Live Wire written! I didn't get through everything I wanted to get through in this chapter and had to bump a fairly major scene to the next one, but I think that's okay. I have some ideas for how I can restructure the next few chapters to get through all the plot I want, while simultaneously keeping my 2-chapters-Mitaka-POV, 1-chapter-Techie-POV structure going.

Whew! It's good to get some of these chapters out of my brain and onto the page. They've been simmering in there for months!