Improvements
Jun. 11th, 2025 11:11 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
artemisdartI was happy with my story for Just Unrequited, but yesterday I was thinking, Wouldn't it be better if it were a bit longer?
Then Zabbers, on the Discord channel for this event, echoed my feelings, wondering if they had put in enough unrequited feelings.
So I woke up this morning, split apart my previous story into 2 chapters, and wrote a third. This way, each chapter is between 4 and 5k, which is a length I like for chapters.
I feel like this iteration of the story is stronger, and it *definitely* has enough unrequited feelings in it now!!!
Then Zabbers, on the Discord channel for this event, echoed my feelings, wondering if they had put in enough unrequited feelings.
So I woke up this morning, split apart my previous story into 2 chapters, and wrote a third. This way, each chapter is between 4 and 5k, which is a length I like for chapters.
I feel like this iteration of the story is stronger, and it *definitely* has enough unrequited feelings in it now!!!
