Well, I probably can't change it, because my poems are tissue paper. :-P But I can keep it in mind for the next one.
I really wanted the left half of the poem to be its own thing, and the right half likewise, but I haven't pulled it off here. I like it anyway, though. :-) Thanks for your kind words!
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I really wanted the left half of the poem to be its own thing, and the right half likewise, but I haven't pulled it off here. I like it anyway, though. :-) Thanks for your kind words!