http://catherinew.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] catherinew.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] artemisdart 2008-02-08 04:55 am (UTC)

Well, I probably can't change it, because my poems are tissue paper. :-P But I can keep it in mind for the next one.

I really wanted the left half of the poem to be its own thing, and the right half likewise, but I haven't pulled it off here. I like it anyway, though. :-) Thanks for your kind words!

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